diff --git a/main.bib b/main.bib
index 696c48f..addee0c 100644
--- a/main.bib
+++ b/main.bib
@@ -196,7 +196,7 @@

 @article{maietti:modular,
   author = {Maietti, M.},
-  title = {Modular correspondence between dependent type theories and categories},
+  title = {Modular correspondence between dependent type theories and categories including pretopoi and topoi},
   journal = {Math. Struct. Comput. Sci.},
   volume = {15},
   number = {6},
@@ -379,24 +379,24 @@
   note = {Book draft},
   year = {2010}}

-%incollection{rathjen:genind,
-%  author = {Rathjen, M.},
-%  title = {Generalized inductive definitions in Constructive Set Theory},
-%  booktitle = {From Sets and Types to Topology and Analysis: Towards Practicable Foundations for Constructive Mathematics},
-%  chapter = {16},
-%  editor = {Crosilla, L. and Schuster, P.},
-%  publisher = {Clarendon Press},
-%  series = {Oxford Logic Guides},
-%  volume = {48},
-%  year = {2005}}
-
-@article{rathjen:genind,
+@incollection{rathjen:genind,
   author = {Rathjen, M.},
   title = {Generalized inductive definitions in Constructive Set Theory},
-  journal = {Oxford Logic Guides},
+  booktitle = {From Sets and Types to Topology and Analysis: Towards Practicable Foundations for Constructive Mathematics},
+  chapter = {16},
+  editor = {Crosilla, L. and Schuster, P.},
+  publisher = {Clarendon Press},
+  series = {Oxford Logic Guides},
   volume = {48},
   year = {2005}}

+%article{rathjen:genind,
+%  author = {Rathjen, M.},
+%  title = {Generalized inductive definitions in Constructive Set Theory},
+%  journal = {Oxford Logic Guides},
+%  volume = {48},
+%  year = {2005}}
+
 @inproceedings{schuster-wessel:cie2020,
   author = {Schuster, P. and Wessel, D.},
   title = {{The computational significance of Hausdorff’s maximal chain principle}},
@@ -595,3 +595,12 @@
   volume = {23},
   number = {2},
   pages = {181--200}}
+
+@article{berardi-valentini:krivine,
+  author = {Berardi, S. and Valentini, S.},
+  title = {Krivine's intuitionistic proof of classical completeness (for countable languages)},
+  journal = {Ann. Pure Appl. Log.},
+  volume = {129},
+  number = {1--3},
+  pages = {93--106},
+  year = {2004}}
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--- a/main.tex
+++ b/main.tex
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@
 \begin{abstract}
   The existence of a maximal ideal in a general nontrivial commutative
   ring is tied together with the axiom of choice.
-  Using the relative interpretation of
+  Following Berardi, Valentini and thus Krivine but using the relative interpretation of
   negation (that is, as ``implies~$0=1$'') we show, in constructive set theory with
   minimal logic, how for countable rings one can do without any kind of choice
   and without the usual decidability assumption that the ring is strongly
@@ -119,7 +119,8 @@ We assume that the ring~$A$ is countable, with~$x_0, x_1, \ldots$ an
 enumeration of the elements of~$A$. We do \emph{not} assume that~$A$ is
 discrete (that is, that~$x = y$ or~$x \neq y$ for all elements of~$A$) or that
 it is strongly discrete (that is, that finitely generated
-ideals of~$A$ are detachable).
+ideals of~$A$ are detachable). Up to Corollary~\ref{cor:is-prime-max}(a) below
+we follow~\cite{berardi-valentini:krivine}.

 We study the following recursive construction of ideals~$\mmm_0, \mmm_1,
 \ldots$ of~$A$:
@@ -210,7 +211,7 @@ and~$\neg\neg\neg\varphi \Rightarrow \neg\varphi$ is a tautology of minimal
 logic.\end{remark}

 This first-order maximality condition is  % of Proposition~\ref{prop:is-maximal} is
-equivalent to the following higher-order version: For every ideal~$\nnn$ such that~$1
+equivalent~\cite{berardi-valentini:krivine} to the following higher-order version: For every ideal~$\nnn$ such that~$1
 \not\in \nnn$, if~$\mmm \subseteq \nnn$, then~$\mmm = \nnn$.

 The quotient ring~$A/\mmm$ is a \emph{residue field} in that~$1 \neq 0$
@@ -298,7 +299,7 @@ then also~$1 \in \mmm + (x_n)$. If~$1 \not\in \mmm_n + (x_n)$, then~$x_n \in
 \mmm$ by Lemma~\ref{lemma:omnibus}(c).
 \end{proof}

-It is remarkable that under the assumption of Proposition~\ref{prop:with-test}, the ideal~$\mmm$ is detachable even though in
+Remarkably, under the assumption of Proposition~\ref{prop:with-test}, the ideal~$\mmm$ is detachable even though in
 general it fails to be finitely generated. Usually in constructive mathematics, ideals which are not
 finitely generated are seldom detachable. For instance the ideal~$\{ x \in
 \ZZ \,|\, x = 0 \vee \varphi \} \subseteq \ZZ$ is detachable if and only
@@ -348,6 +349,7 @@ setup, we have the following substitute concerning complements:
 \[ \sqrt{(0)}^c =
   \bigcup_{\substack{\text{$\ppp \subseteq A$}\\\text{$\ppp$ prime}\\\text{$\ppp$ $\neg\neg$-stable}}} \ppp^c =
   \bigcup_{\substack{\text{$\ppp \subseteq A$}\\\text{$\ppp$ prime}\\\text{$\ppp$ radical}}} \ppp^c. \]
+\newpage

 \begin{lemma}\label{lemma:x-prime}
 Let~$x \in A$. Then there is an ideal~$\ppp \subseteq A$ which is
@@ -463,18 +465,18 @@ induction.

 Just as Corollary~\ref{cor:nilp-prime} is a constructive substitute
 for the recognition of the intersection of all prime ideals as the nilradical,
-the following proposition is one for the
-recognition of the intersection of all maximal ideals as the Jacobson radical.
+the following proposition is a substitute for the classical fact that
+the intersection of all maximal ideals is the Jacobson radical.
 %
 As is customary in constructive
 algebra~\cite[Section~IX.1]{lombardi-quitte:constructive-algebra}, by
 \emph{Jacobson radical} we mean the ideal
 $\{ x \in A \,|\, \forall y \in A\_ 1 - xy \in A^\times \}$.
-An element~$x$ is said to be \emph{apart from the Jacobson radical} if and only if
-there exists an element~$y \in A$ such that~$1-xy$ is not invertible.
+%An element~$x$ is said to be \emph{apart} from it iff
+%there is an element~$y \in A$ such that~$1-xy$ is not invertible.
 % In general, this condition is stronger than~$x$ merely not being an element of~$J$.

-\begin{proposition}Let~$x \in A$. If~$x$ is apart from the Jacobson radical, then
+\begin{proposition}Let~$x \in A$. If~$x$ is \emph{apart} from the Jacobson radical (that is, $1-xy \not\in A^\times$ for some element~$y$), then
 there is a maximal ideal~$\mmm$ such that~$x \not\in \mmm$.
 \end{proposition}

@@ -568,11 +570,11 @@ a ring; such that axioms such as\par
 \end{align*}}%
 hold. This conception of arithmetized rings deviates from the usual definition
 in reverse mathematics~\cite[Definition~III.5.1]{simpson:subsystems} to support
-quotients even when Heyting arithmetic cannot verify the existence of
+quotients even when~\textsc{ha} cannot verify the existence of
 canonical representatives of equivalence classes.

 Although first-order arithmetic cannot quantify over ideals of arithmetized
-rings, specific ideals can be given by formulas~$I(n)$ such that axioms such that
+rings, specific ideals can be given by formulas~$I(n)$ such that axioms such as
 {\small\begin{align*}
   \forall n\_ & I(n) \Rightarrow A(n) && \text{``$I \subseteq A$''} \\
   \exists n\_ & Z(n) \wedge I(n) && \text{``$0 \in I$''}
@@ -600,8 +602,7 @@ a uniform definition might not be possible.
 This issue has a counterpart in type-theoretic foundations of mathematics,
 where the family~$(\mmm_n)_{n \in \NN}$ cannot be given as an inductive family
 (failing the positivity check), and is also noted, though not resolved, in
-related work on a constructive version of Gödel's completeness
-theorem~\cite[p.~11]{herbelin-ilik:henkin}.
+related work~\cite[p.~11]{herbelin-ilik:henkin}.
 The issue does not arise in the context of~\textsc{pa}, where the law of
 excluded middle allows us to bound the logical complexity: We can blithely define
 the joint indicator function~$g(n,i)$ for the sets~$G_n$ (such that~$G_n = \{